First Freedom

I don’t write a lot of poetry. Over the years there’s been a bit here and there. Almost all of it is free verse, as is today’s offering. This was supposed to be an essay or short story, but it refused to flow. The creative voice suggested some verse, and it flowed. Hope you enjoy.

As always, thoughts on the piece are welcome. As are general thoughts on poetry or bicycling!

First Freedom

My first real freedom came on two wheels.

My world had been defined,

By the length of my legs

And my endurance for there and back.

On the day my father let go,

Allowing me to ride free,

The boundaries of my world

Exploded.

Even with a single speed

The old boundaries were reached faster

And more easily achieved.

I could stand at them and look

For new limits

Around the next curve

Or over that hill.

Those wheels carried me into college

Across the campus with a little style

A little swagger.

New enjoyment arrived as well

Young women on bikes!

Long legs and small patches of bare skin

Where their tops pulled away from their jeans.

Today it’s a greater joy than ever before

Legs and lungs are pumping

Blood pounding in my veins

Those boundaries are miles away

And I smile

Knowing that they are calling my name.

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